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BEHIND
THE CURTAIN: An Introduction.
Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain.
Our goal in putting together BEHIND THE CURTAIN
is to provide a resource for those wanting to learn more about
the craft of writing, and more specifically, comics writing. I
would like to stress however, that I am not a not a professional
writer. I don’t make any claims to know how to write. We want
the information we provide to do all the talking; that and the
occasional professional who will stop by and share their experiences.
Whether you put any of this information into use, is entirely
up to you.
What follows is intended to provide a basic understanding
about the structure of modern storytelling. These are not rules
designed to limit a storyteller. Rather, they are to serve as
a guide to story structure.
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For roughly the last 2000 years, western literature
has been comprised of three elements: a beginning, a middle, and
an end. Stories, whether they are in the form of a comic book,
a novel, a TV show, a movie, or a play, all have the three-act
structure in common. The beginning of a story corresponds to Act
I, the middle to Act II, and the end to Act II.
As seen in Figure 1, a story is a whole, made
up of different parts. In classical terms, these are the introduction,
the rising action, and the denouement.
These
acts are more commonly known as Set-Up, Development, and Resolution.
Act I - The Set-Up
The set-up gives us vital information about the
story, establishing who and what the story is about. Who are the
main characters? What do they want? Where is the story located?
What type of story is it (comedy, drama etc.)? Most importantly,
the set-up introduces us to the main character's dramatic need,
also referred to as the central question. What does the main character
want to win, gain or achieve in the course of the story? What
are the obstacles in that character's way? The set- up gives the
story its focus, as well as a push that gets the plot moving,
leading us into Act II.
The following contains spoilers if you haven't
read WATCHMEN…
For example, in Chapter I of Alan Moore's and
Dave Gibbons' maxi series, WATCHMEN, we are immediately introduced
to the main character, Rorschach, and his dramatic need. Someone
has murdered the superhero The Comedian, and Rorschach has committed
himself to finding out who it was, because as he writes in his
journal "… there is good and there is evil, and evil must be punished.
Even the face of Armageddon I shall not compromise in this." (Page
24) This statement will carry Rorschach through the entire story.
This first chapter also introduces the other protagonists (as
well as antagonists) in the story, and gives some brief background
on all of the characters.
Act II - Development
Development is a unit of dramatic action where
the main character is faced with obstacle after obstacle that
must be overcome in order to achieve his/her dramatic need. The
plot thickens, as things become progressively more difficult for
the protagonist. Act II also contains two turning points, one
that begins the second act, and another that ends it. These points
are important in keeping the action of the story moving. Also
called plot points, they serve to tighten tension and make obstacles
tougher than they seemed before. Turning points add unpredictability
to the story and maintains the audience's interest. The second
turning point is especially important in giving the story a sense
of urgency. The stakes are raised and the danger towards the main
character is increased. It also serves to propel the story into
Act III.
While we continue to learn more about the characters
involved in WATCHMEN, the story intensifies with the first plot
twist. Act II begins with Chapter III as we discover that Rorschach
must continue his search for the killer while the threat of nuclear
war between America and the USSR looms near. To make matters worse,
America's protector, Dr. Manhattan, has been forced to leave the
Earth. Rorschach is again confronted with more obstacles in Chapter
V as he is framed and arrested for the murder of another superhero,
Jacobi Moloch. Finally, our second plot twist occurs in Chapter
X when Nite-Owl and Rorschach believe they have uncovered the
murderer.
ACT
III - The Resolution
The resolution takes place from the end of the
second turning point until the end of the story. It contains the
climax, where the main character is able to fulfill his/her dramatic
need. A change occurs. The status quo is altered. The problem
is solved and the tension is let up. After the climax, all the
loose ends of the story are tied up. Generally, this means a happy
ending for the main character. The audience is given a measure
of satisfaction from the conclusion of the story. Of course, this
does not have to be the case. Oftentimes, the hero is not victorious,
or the resolution is left open-ended. But the story still manages
to entertain its audience.
WATCHMEN's Act III begins with Rorschach's and
Nite-Owl's arrival in Antarctica, where they plan to confront
the suspected killer. The climax takes place at the end of Chapter
XI where Adrian Veidt confesses murdering the Comedian, and reveals
his master plan. From this point onward, the story moves toward
a final resolution. The other heroes agree to keep Veidt's plan
a secret for the good of the world, but Rorschach disagrees, keeping
true to his promise to punish evil. Unfortunately for him, Rorschach
is murdered by Dr. Manhattan in order to keep his silence. With
the main character's failure and subsequent death, does WATCHMEN
become a tragedy? There are several ways to interpret the ending,
but on WATCHMEN's last page, we are left with the possibility
that Rorschach was indeed successful after all.
Below is screenwriting instructor
Syd Field's paradigm of dramatic structure. This should give you
an idea into what structure looks like.
Remember,
rules are made to be broken. Structure shouldn't imprison a writer,
but free them to focus on the story. As Field says, "It's the
story that forms the structure; structure doesn't form the story".
In addition to the BEHIND THE CURTAIN column,
we're proud to present an essay on plotting the contempoary comic,
by noted SPECTRE scribe John Ostrander. Make sure to check out
the INDUSTRIAL
section to read this informative essay.

Francis Lord is
an independent filmmaker who resides in Canada. His first feature,
Libraria, will be out in the summer of 2000.
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